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Post Post #0 (isolation #0) » Thu Jan 19, 2017 7:08 am

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drealmerz7 wrote:okay, done, now to have them ridicule it and tell me it's too scum-sided...I do think it is more balanced than it appears to most at a first glance (and do consider myself quite good at seeing balance!)

let me know if you need anything else from me

thanks!

Spoiler: ?s 1-4
1.) yes
2.) 13p
3.) Ircher
4.) I have modded 1 game on a different site, it was a 17player role-heavy extreme-flavor-heavy "theme" (heavily tweaked + semi-invented roles by me in a very complex-mechanic setup that experienced mods and players both were impressed by [though certainly not universally!] - not ego-boasting, just giving you the details - I can tell you more about it or show it to you, Tammy and Nacho both visited my HS to play it via invitation from a fellow from my HS that recently made a bit of a name for himself at the MU tournament and befriended them / got them and some others to come over and help me fill it , btw it was 10v5v1v1 and town won! - I've also hosted some 1NightWW at parties too!

Spoiler: post #00
RULES

General
:


1.
Read everything I post, if it appears you have not, I will be PMing you
.

2.
If you have
ANY QUESTIONS
for me during the course of the game, PM them to me. All questions posed to me in the thread will be ignored
.

replacements
:
all replacement requests must be sent to me via PM, do not mention anything about being replaced in the thread, ever


V/LA
:
anyone going on V/LA must notify me via PM their anticipated amount of V/LA time, do not mention anything about your V/LA in the thread, ever


3.
DO NOT edit your posts
.

4.
No cryptoclaiming, no hidden or broken text, no spoiler trees >7
.

5.
NO SMOKING or VAPING of tobacco or synthetic products
.

Gamesmanship
:

6.
Have fun! Remember it is your fellow gamers' goals to also have fun
.

7.
You must make at least one
quality-content
post
once every 72hours
. If you do not you will be prodded. If you receive 2 prods you will be replaced before you receive a 3rd
.

8.
Contention is part of the game, but don't let it get out of hand, if you feel someone is goading you, show others how scummy that is and try to get them lynched
.

9.
Even the slightest referece or allusion to any ongoing games (even mentioning the fact that you are in them) is
STRICTLY FORBIDDEN
and you will be
MODKILLED
for the offense
.

Game specifics
:

10.
Days will last 10 days. Nights will last 3 days followed by a resolution period
.


11.
To vote for a playe you
MUST
use the
VOTE: TAG
if you wish to not be voting for a player, you
MUST
use the
UNVOTE: TAG
and their name to unvote them
.
No exceptions will be counted
.
You may
VOTE: No Lynch.
If no majority of votes are on a player at the time of deadline, No Lynch will be achieved
.


example of how voting works
:

VOTE: SuspiciousMan- to cast your first vote of the Day, then you must:

UNVOTE: SuspiciousMan- in order to clear your vote so that you may then:

VOTE: SuspiciousWoman- to cast a vote on a new player

12.
Majority lynch with hammer mechanic is in effect
.

13.
You may request a votecount by entering
"
@VC, please
" (or some variant, bolded and underlined, you may also vote:tag it)
-
I will do my best to comply in a timely manner
.

Spoiler: Sample VT PM[area
-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!

you are
Vanilla Town


- your power is your vote, use it wisely!

- you win when all threats to town have been eliminated and at least 1 town player lives

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not
[/area]

Spoiler: post#01
a narrator starts, his voice a nasally thick New-English,


New Haven, Connecticut,
(he distinctly says it "CONNECTicut", and the tight CT sound pokes you in your ears)
, March 1922 (
all evidence of there having been an 'r' in "march", gone.)
Late evening hours.

A group of friends make their way down a sidestreet having just dined on a meal much to their liking. As they walk and discuss among themselves what is next for the night, a rain begins to fall. It quickly turns into a hard rain and they scurry down an alleyway and open the door to an establishment whose lights are on.

The smell of tobacco and alcohol is full in the air and as they shake the wet from themselves and cross the threshold into the speakeasy. Silence also fills the air as they enter. They look around with ill-ease, notcing the place went from lively to silent, and collectively turn to go back into the rain. Before they are even a step turned, a soft and friendly voice calls to them from a second-tier balcony.

"Welcome! Please, come in, you merely startled us. We don't get many un-announced visitors. Please, stay." His voice is disarming and welcoming. The group turns back into the establishment and begin to look around.

The rest of the patrons and members of the establishment are still focused on them and the silence is thick in the air after the apparent owner stops speaking. It's still a little awkward for everyone, except him, it seems.

He makes his way down the steps as the guests remove their coats and hats and set them on their respective racks.

"Sit, have a drink, this establishment is protected. There are no worries. Everyone, get back to what you're doing, you're making our guests nervous."

With that, things seem to return to normal and for a few minutes you talk with the owner about menial things.

Outside, the storm grows and becomes more and more violent. Lightning and thunder approach at a rapid pace.

"Well! It looks like you're here for a bit until this passes. Might I offer you all a game of poker with your drinks? Perhaps one of the single fellows there (he gestures to a few of the friends clearly not paired with females in the group) would like some company?" The inference is clear.

Suddenly, there is a simultaneous flash and loud crash and the electricity is out.

The storm is directly upon them. Thunder crashes and lightning flashes in a continuously rolling stream of power while the rain comes down in a torrent.

After a few moments the owner has lit a match and is lighting lanterns along the walls and counters.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" One of the women in the establishment screams. You all turn and rush to where she is. She stands over a man with a knife sticking out of his chest, he is dead. The owner rushes through everyone.

"Get out of my way!" He kneels down over the body.

"OHNO! Bill!? Bill!" Bill was the owner's best friend. He turns up and looks at the group of you. "Who did this? Did any of you see who did this!?" The only audible response is the sound of footsteps running into the bathroom, quickly followed by the sound of retching. Everyone else is staring blankly at him and at each other.

"We're getting out of here," someone says, and with that numerous people turn and begin to head toward the door.

There is a gunshot.

"Stop! No one is going anywhere! Not until we figure out who killed Bill! There are..." he takes a moment and counts the group around him "nine...stay here...if any of you attempt to leave I'm shooting you in the back!" He goes to the men's room, returns a moment later pulling the retching man by the arm "ten"...he says as he pushes him towards the mass group. He enters the lady's room, comes back out with a sobbing woman and shoves her into the group "eleven", goes up the stairs, opens a door where he apparently knows two people to be "get out here, someone's been killed...thirteen." He comes back down the stairs, following the only two occupants from upstairs.

"Okay, there's thirteen of you, none of you are leaving until you tell me who killed Bill. You have exactly..." he pulls a pocketwatch out "two hours from now to come to a decision among the thirteen of you on who did it, or help you all, I'm going to kill every last one of you."

Spoiler: post#02
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[spoiler=waiting out the storm
Spoiler: murdered in the Night[/spoiler

Spoiler: role PMs
-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #Player#!


you are a
Town
Hooker
/
Prostitute


- at Night, you may select one player to target with your ability

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when all threats to town have been eliminated and at least 1 town player lives

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

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-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!


you are a
Town 2x-Doctor


- two times during the game, at Night, you may select a player to target with your ability

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when all threats to town have been eliminated and at least 1 town player lives

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!


you are a
Town 1x-Vigilante


- one time during the game, at Night, you may select a player to target with your ability

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when all threats to town have been eliminated and at least 1 town player lives

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!


you are a
Town
Compulsive
BodyGuard


- at Night you
MUST
select a player to target with your ability

- you may also have the power of a vote. Use it wisely.

- you win when all threats to town have been eliminated and at least 1 town player lives

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!


you are a
Town BodyGuard


- at Night you may select a player to target with your ability

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when all threats to town have been eliminated and at least 1 town player lives

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!

you are
Vanilla Town


- your power is your vote, use it wisely!

- you win when all threats to town have been eliminated and at least 1 town player lives

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

^^ x3 ^^

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!

you are a
1x Strongman Mafia 2xDoctor


- you MAY NOT use the Strongman modifier on a Night you use the Doctor ability

- your teammates are:
#player#2
,
#player#3
,
#player#4


- your team has acces to #Night-Chat#

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when nothing can stop Mafia from being in control

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!

you are a
1x Strongman Mafia 2xJailKeeper


- you MAY NOT use the Strongman modifier on a Night you use the JailKeep ability

- your teammates are:
#player#1
,
#player#3
,
#player#4


- your team has acces to #Night-Chat#

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when nothing can stop Mafia from being in control

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!

you are
Mafia
!

- your teammates are:
#player#1
,
#player#2
,
#player#4


- your team has acces to #Night-Chat#

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when nothing can stop Mafia from being in control

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

^^ x2 ^^

-

-
Welcome to mini-normal ####, #player#!

you are a
Serial Killer
with a 2x strongman modifier to apply to two NightKills

- you also have the power of a vote! Use it wisely.

- you win when all players are dead

ENJOY!!!

please respond with confirmation that you understand your role and alignment, or with questions if not

Spoiler: NA result PMs
You have successfully RoleBlocked your target!

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You have failed to RoleBlock your target!

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You have successfully healed your target!

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You have failed to heal your target!

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You were prevented from healing your target!

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You have successfully BodyGuarded your target! You are dead!

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Your NightKill attempt was successful!

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You successfully performed a NightKill!

-
You were prevented from performing a NightKill.

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Your NightKill attempt was blocked!

-
Your JailKeep attempt was successful!

-
Your JailKeep attempt was blocked.

-
You have been killed!
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Post Post #3 (isolation #1) » Thu Feb 02, 2017 9:00 pm

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If you make it 14p then it'd be a Large and I don't think you can run a Large as your first game - if this is your first game, ofc?

Secondly - within the normal queue, mod trolling and WIFOM is generally discouraged - people come here for a certain type of game and it's unfair to fuck with them really.
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Post Post #47 (isolation #2) » Sun Feb 05, 2017 8:24 pm

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bleh. all the BPs and RBing flying around is going to be super unfun for players, I think.

Yes, you have the strongman to bust through, but the BP Bodyguard is quite an overpowered role.
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Post Post #60 (isolation #3) » Mon Feb 06, 2017 7:09 pm

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I'm going to veto 8/4/1 immediately.

It's not
normal
. There are certain expectations with the Normal Queue, and that goes against them. So unless you're going to run it as open and say "guys this is an 8/4/1", then I'm afraid I won't pass it for balance/normality.

Run an 8/4/1 in the mini theme queue. Run something more normal - 9/1/3 or 10/3 or 10/2/1 here, please.
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Post Post #62 (isolation #4) » Tue Feb 07, 2017 5:38 am

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8/3/1 still doesn't seem great.
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Post Post #124 (isolation #5) » Fri Feb 24, 2017 7:08 am

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Yeah we can approve for Normality but not balance, I think?
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Post Post #131 (isolation #6) » Sat Feb 25, 2017 4:07 am

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I'm also a reviewer - mainly just watching from the sidelines.
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Post Post #136 (isolation #7) » Mon Feb 27, 2017 5:26 am

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No.

Ideally I'll have a Mini Normal and a Large Normal in sign ups. Members of this site can't seem to follow straightforward instructions like /in for Large or /in for Mini. I'm not complicating things further.
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Post Post #140 (isolation #8) » Wed Mar 01, 2017 6:59 am

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or people could learn to not be dickheads.
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Post Post #143 (isolation #9) » Mon Mar 06, 2017 5:09 am

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Your game finished reviews before mhsmith's, that's all it is.
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Post Post #153 (isolation #10) » Wed Mar 08, 2017 7:11 pm

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Doesn't the Jailkeeper also prevent actions targetting them as the normal definition? IF so, your JK PM needs a rework.
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Post Post #156 (isolation #11) » Wed Mar 08, 2017 7:28 pm

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You still need to add that it protects them from a kill.
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Post Post #159 (isolation #12) » Wed Mar 08, 2017 7:43 pm

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these should've been done and signed off on before you went into sign ups.
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Post Post #166 (isolation #13) » Thu Mar 09, 2017 12:41 am

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Don't pm individual players. You say that the game goes into just on the last day, let it go through. If the vig doesn't submit then they lose simple as that.
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Post Post #177 (isolation #14) » Thu Mar 09, 2017 5:39 am

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i repeat, this should've all been sorted before you went into signups. we dropped the ball here.
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Post Post #180 (isolation #15) » Thu Mar 09, 2017 5:45 am

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I think it's the mod's decision.
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Post Post #252 (isolation #16) » Thu Mar 09, 2017 7:17 pm

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No.

Your deadlines are
either
12 days
or
14 days.

It can be a tactical thing to wait until a deadline is nearly up. Not having a fixed deadline per day stops this.

At the start of each day you say "It is Day x, with x alive it takes x to lynch, the deadline is in x days, at x time on x date.
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Post Post #255 (isolation #17) » Thu Mar 09, 2017 8:07 pm

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I'm 1891. You're 1892. We share numbers with the Mini Theme queue.
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Post Post #261 (isolation #18) » Fri Mar 10, 2017 10:12 pm

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Not normal for the site therefore not normal.

We'll discuss it post game.

You can open the game and let them have 48 hrs opening chat
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Post Post #266 (isolation #19) » Fri Mar 10, 2017 10:52 pm

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No. You need to set deadlines for things and stick to them.

Either unlock the thread and give the scum 48 hours to chat as well, or keep the thread locked and give the scum 48 hours to chat then unlock the thread.
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