THE APPRENTICE [Four Remain?!]
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Blackberry wrote:
ConcerningAssignment #2, I thought you did very well with coming up with a game idea that embodies all five of the fundamentals that your team selected. I also believe theopeingpost was aesthetically pleasing and cleverly written. While I found the storyline was well written, I do also believe it was a bit lengthy. At first glance, one might think 'this looks too long to read' and leave the thread. Just a thought to consider. The flavor is clearly there, there is clearly balance with everyone beginning on the same footing. It is an innovative idea, combining qualities of the Haunted Mansion type games with challenges, which at the same time leads to provoking player dynamics.[/color][/size][/area]
Trump needs someone to proof-read his posts O.o
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