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Alisae · Post Post #51 (isolation #0) » Mon Jan 11, 2021 5:55 pm

If anyone has anything to say to me I'll hear ya out ig so /in

Alisae · Post Post #52 (isolation #1) » Mon Jan 11, 2021 6:04 pm

In post 33, Haschel Cedricson wrote:I'm intrigued but 90% of the thing I need to work on is activity and I already know that.

I don't think you should be working on your activity.
I think your play is fine from the 2 games I played with you, or atleast the one game I played with you and the other where I kinda replaced out because I forgot I was supposed to be doing a post restriction.

I wouldn't say activity is the thing you need to work on because if ur town regardless it should generally show, saying from 2 games of experience w/ u and just seeing u play, it generally does show.

Activity can sure be improved but generally I wouldn't say that its a problem?

I feel like to properly assess your play (or anyone elses honestly), you need to play with the person a lot. 1 game isn't enough. So I would just say to you is to just play more honestly.

I liked how you went about questioning in the first Guns and Roses.

Alisae · Post Post #62 (isolation #2) » Tue Jan 12, 2021 5:50 pm

link?

Alisae · Post Post #70 (isolation #3) » Tue Jan 12, 2021 6:26 pm

Gamma some of those losses I felt like were kinda just lost on rand tbh.
Tbh sometimes as scum you just get fucked by the rand it honestly happens.

Alisae · Post Post #71 (isolation #4) » Tue Jan 12, 2021 6:26 pm

67 I think only works if you don't lose to rand.
If you have dead weight partners then like honestly what can you do tbh.

Alisae · Post Post #73 (isolation #5) » Tue Jan 12, 2021 6:41 pm

people need to stop bussing tbh

Alisae · Post Post #75 (isolation #6) » Tue Jan 12, 2021 6:55 pm

Best Article on bussing ever made: https://wiki.mafiascum.net/index.php?ti ... _to_bus%3F

Alisae · Post Post #82 (isolation #7) » Wed Jan 13, 2021 5:26 pm

In post 51, Alisae wrote:If anyone has anything to say to me I'll hear ya out ig so /in

Alisae · Post Post #90 (isolation #8) » Thu Jan 14, 2021 10:54 am

In post 85, NorwegianboyEE wrote:I suck, especially as scum.
Plz help.
You don’t even need to give me constructive criticism about how to improve. Just roast me.

when hydraing with you I found that your arguements logically suck and when you push things you go a bit too hard it, while you try to spin what they're saying as scummy, which in return makes you look scummy and unnatural when you're pushing reads.
Also the only thing you know how to do is push it seems like.

In otherwords you're stupidly agressive.

This is advice for ur townplay btw.