Theme Game Help

[DiamondSentinel]

So, I also play mafia on another site (pokemonshowdown, if you are on there at all), and in the mafia room (it's a chatroom), we are submitting UCTs. UCTs are basically Theme Games, but usually have a special theme or mechanic, and are open set-ups.

I was trying to build one around Heavy Rain, and I was looking for some help on it. Could anyone give me some help?

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I was wondering if you guys could help me adjust the balance of this theme. I understand that Ethan is a bit overpowered right now, but that's why I added the smaller wagon mechanic. This would mirror the personal sacrifice he goes through throughout the game. I also have a lot of roles that bounce off of each other and augment each other, to portray the themes of interpersonal connection and dependency throughout the game.