CADS!

[Wall-E]

Change, Add, Delete, Swap!

Felissan

★

Now befriend Gunther Doofernschmirtz the "attractive death" researcher, pretty please.

★

StrangerCoug eats in a prism, clearing the cheese wheels on mice.

Wall-E

★

Will, change the game.

StrangerCoug

★

So, blasphemers, we now go see The Antidisestablishmentarian Zombie Ninja Magic Robot Invaders rectify opinions and spread raspberry rumors that fasting Metal Sonic shampooed from this detailed sports magazine report on embracing awkward elderly Space JavaScript role players assembling acid kazoos.

Rules:

To play,

change

add

or

delete

one word in the current sentence or

swap

any two words in the sentence and repost it in bold. The sentence must remain grammatically correct but does not need to make logical sense. For example, if the sentence is "Bob and Jim ate my dumb donut," valid plays include, "Sally and Jim ate my dumb donut," "Bob and Jim ate my ugly, dumb donut," "Bob and Jim ate my donut," and "Jim and Bob ate my dumb donut." Players may not post twice in a row. In the case of cross posting, the first post made is valid. There is no penalty for cross posting, but there is one for continuing an invalid cross post, so be sure the sentence you are editing is the current, valid sentence. If you declare a sentence invalid and you aren't corect, you also incur a penalty.

Scoring:

You must call out someone else's mistake with a quote before they edit the mistake (time stamps), if they made one. Whoever catches a grammatical mistake starts the next sentence and earns 1 point.
Every 10 valid posts also count as 1 point.
Making a sentence that nobody is able to add, change, delete or swap into a valid sentence within 24 hours is worth a point, and the person who posted it starts the next sentence.
Penalties are -.3 points to your score.

The game continues until someone earns 3 points at which point we start over and the winner earns a GOLD

★

STAR.

Starting sentence:

The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog.

[JDGA]

The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.

Y'know, to make it the proper actual sentence.

[Wall-E]

The quick racist fox jumps over the lazy dog.

[SleepyKrew]

The quick racist fox jumps over the angry dog.

[Wall-E]

The quick racist fox jumps over the angry cliff.

Score:

Spoiler:

Wall-E: .2
JDGA: .1
SleepyKrew: .1

[JDGA]

The quick racist jumps over the angry cliff.

[Wall-E]

The quick racist jumps off the angry cliff.

This

escalated

descended

quickly

foxily.

Score:

Spoiler:

Wall-E: .3
JDGA: .2
SleepyKrew: .1

[imaginality]

The quick racist sucks off the angry cliff.

[JerryArr]

The quick racist sucks off the poisonous cliff.

[Wall-E]

The quick racist sucks off the poisonous homophobe.

In a perfect scenario they would be the same gender and different nationalities.

Score:

Spoiler:

Wall-E: .4
JDGA: .2
JerryArr: .1
imaginality: .1
SleepyKrew: .1

[JDGA]

The venomous racist sucks off the poisonous homophobe.

Okay,

now

it's perfect.

[SleepyKrew]

The venomous racist cuts off the poisonous homophobe.

[Felissan]

The venomous homophobe cuts off the poisonous racist.

EDIT: here, have a period.

[Wall-E]

The venomous Pokemon cuts off the poisonous racist.

Score:

Spoiler:

Wall-E: .5
JDGA: .3
SleepyKrew: .2
JerryArr: .1
imaginality: .1
Felissan: .1

[Felissan]

The venomous Pokemon cuts off the poisonous trainer.

[Plotinus]

The venomous Pokemon eats off the poisonous trainer.

[inspiratieloos]

The venomous Pok

é

mon cuts off the poisonous trainer.

Do misspellings count as mistakes?

The venomous Pokémon cut off the poisonous trainer.

[Wall-E]

The venomous Pokémon Cut the poisonous trainer.

Normally misspellings count, but it's hard to get a tilde on a phone, so in this case no. But yeah, normally misspellings would count as a mistake.

Spoiler: Score

Wall-E: .6
JDGA: .3
SleepyKrew: .2
Felissan: .2
JerryArr: .1
imaginality: .1
Plotinus: .1
inspiratieloos: .1

[Plotinus]

The venomous Pokémon ate the poisonous trainer.

[SleepyKrew]

The venomous Pokémon ate the poisonous mushroom.

[Plotinus]

The legendary Pokémon ate the poisonous mushroom.

[Wall-E]

The legendary Pokémon was the poisonous mushroom.

Spoiler: Score

Wall-E: .7
Plotinus: .3
SleepyKrew: .3
JDGA: .3
Felissan: .2
JerryArr: .1
imaginality: .1
inspiratieloos: .1

[imaginality]

The legendary mushroom was the poisonous Pokémon.

[Wall-E]

The legendary mushroom was the poisonous answer.

Spoiler: Score

Wall-E: .8
Plotinus: .3
SleepyKrew: .3
JDGA: .3
imaginality: .2
Felissan: .2
JerryArr: .1
inspiratieloos: .1

[Plotinus]

The legendary Joker was the poisonous answer.

Spoiler: Score

Wall-E: .8
Plotinus: .4
SleepyKrew: .3
JDGA: .3
imaginality: .2
Felissan: .2
JerryArr: .1
inspiratieloos: .1