Wandering the South Commoners' District

[cuban smoker]

The English is mostly solid; I think the major problem is in verbe tense. Also, I think your history should reflect the idea that after the city walls were built, but before the Briaf came, it would be logical that people would still live outside the walls. See South Mercantile for my interpretation. Other than that, I'm happy. Just timing, that's all.