Song Contest 128 (Results posted!)

Errantparabola · Post Post #9 (isolation #0) » Thu Jan 24, 2019 12:55 pm

ego.
my submission will be just as annoying as the last one

Errantparabola · Post Post #23 (isolation #1) » Tue Feb 05, 2019 8:16 am

99% chance Panzer catches my 12

Errantparabola · Post Post #24 (isolation #2) » Tue Feb 05, 2019 10:48 am

If you like my song PLEASE check out the live, the middle section comes so much to life

Errantparabola · Post Post #54 (isolation #3) » Sun Mar 17, 2019 11:49 am

In post 26, Parama wrote:Egypt – It’s certainly interesting enough for a 9 minute track, but I feel the transitions between different sections don’t work so well, and the song seems to want to make me feel more that it actually ends up doing, or that’s the impression I get from the lyrics. Also wish the female vocals were used more. But I mean I do like this a decent bit, regardless, it’s pretty solid. (DECENT)

sorry for the necro, but to respond to this-- your latter point would be exactly my one criticism as well.

this album being a sufjan-esque "retrospective of los angeles" type deal, it seems almost disingenous to me that he's trying to insert himself into the emotional core of this complex tragedy without any real connection to it. especially the whole "i was too young to die" line just does not really land at all for me.