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[unwnd]

I would like to receive criticism if anyone has it

pedit Original post too specific

[unwnd]

I would like to receive criticism if anyone has it

pedit Original post too specific

Bumping

It's very important to me that my posts are comprehensible (bonus points agreeable).

Both alignments, the way I interpret my own thoughts is crucial to me

Also my scumgame is a bit rusty, my issue is that I feel like I'm trying too hard. Like, as scum I'll pull stuff out of my ass and I literally sit there and think

'Man, If I was town I wouldn't believe any of this I'm saying' How do I stop that impulse? thanks

[unwnd]

Yeah that makes sense

I'm a wordy individual, that's very apparent. It's just that as scum I think I exaggerate this behavior, and I end up saying a lot of purposeless things. I actually enjoy being scum a great amount, I just feel like I'm not being deliberate enough and to some degree as you said not agend-y enough. I lean too much on heplful analysis than driving possible lims.

[unwnd]

Do one for me as well Bell (town or scum). I value your input

[unwnd]

I actually quite enjoy being scum and consider it to be my stronger suit, but I thought your advice was appropriate, and I will keep it documented. I appreciate it a ton