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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2019 7:55 am
by Loopdan
JABBA THE HUT: C-C-C-C-C-ombo Breaker!!!!
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2019 12:17 pm
by shaft.ed
I hate the Lucas edits
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 9:37 am
by YellowSnow
LUKE: He knew my father?
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:04 am
by Loopdan
OWEN: Ég sagði þér að gleyma því. Eina áhyggjuefni þitt er að undirbúa nýja droids fyrir morguninn. Um morguninn vil ég þá á suðurhrygginum, sem vinnur út úr þessum þéttum.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:17 am
by YellowSnow
English only please
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:19 am
by Loopdan
Owen: I told you to forget it. Your only
concern is to prepare the new droids
for tomorrow. In the morning I want
them on the south ridge working out
those condensers.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:22 am
by YellowSnow
LUKE: Yes, sir. I think those new droids are going to work out fine. In fact, I, uh, was also thinking about our agreement about my staying on another season. And if these new droids do work out, I want to transmit my application to the Academy this year.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:28 am
by Loopdan
OWEN: You mean the next semester before harvest? Dammit Luke!
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:39 am
by YellowSnow
(commentary is fine if it's in parentheses but let's not add or remove anything from the script, please.)
LUKE: Sure, there're more than enough droids.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:48 am
by Loopdan
(Sorry. Lucas just sucks at writing dialogue so I thought I could spice it up a bit. I'll keep it in parenthesis.)
OWEN: Harvest is when I need you the most. Only one more season. This year we'll make enough on the harvest so I'll be able to hire some more hands. And then you can go to the Academy next year.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 11:03 am
by YellowSnow
(I think EP IV is probably the second best written script behind EP V)
OWEN: You must understand I need you here, Luke.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 11:06 am
by Loopdan
LUKE: But it's a whole 'nother year.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 11:08 am
by YellowSnow
OWEN: Look, it's only one more season.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 11:10 am
by Loopdan
LUKE: Yeah, that's what you said last year when Biggs and Tank left.
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 11:18 am
by YellowSnow
BERU: Where are you going?
Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2019 2:19 pm
by Charles510
LUKE: It looks like I'm going nowhere. I have to finish cleaning those droids.
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 5:31 am
by YellowSnow
BERU: Owen, he can't stay here forever. Most of his friends have gone. It means so much to him.
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 5:42 am
by Charles510
OWEN: I'll make it up to him next year. I promise.
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 5:43 am
by YellowSnow
BERU: Luke's just not a farmer, Owen. He has too much of his father in him.
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 5:53 am
by Charles510
OWEN: That's what I'm afraid of.
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:01 am
by YellowSnow
LUKE: What are you doing hiding there?
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:12 am
by Charles510
C3PO: It wasn't my fault, sir. Please don't deactivate me. I told him not to go, but he's faulty, malfunctioning; kept babbling on about his mission.
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:21 am
by YellowSnow
Luke: Oh, no!
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:24 am
by Charles510
C3PO: That R2 unit has always been a problem. These astro-droids are getting quite out of hand. Even I can't understand their logic at times.
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:33 am
by YellowSnow
LUKE: How could I be so stupid? He's nowhere in sight. Blast it!