Survivor: Summertime (The End!)

Shiidaji · Post Post #350 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:17 pm

Bonus points to whichever tribe didn't wreck my isometric beach house. (C'mon it was pretty!)

In post 349, Lord Mhork wrote:So if we lose, can I throw a bitch fit?

Yes.

Lord Mhork · Post Post #351 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:18 pm

Woohoo!

ISO · Post Post #352 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:18 pm

I made the volcano before I even saw yalls stuff, lol.

Marquis · Post Post #353 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:19 pm

In post 348, orcinus_theoriginal wrote:Yes JDGA should win by effort values

252atk 252spe 4hp CB Ledyba

its a ledian
get out

orcinus_theoriginal · Post Post #354 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:20 pm

In post 353, Marquis wrote:
In post 348, orcinus_theoriginal wrote:Yes JDGA should win by effort values

252atk 252spe 4hp CB Ledyba
its a ledian
get out

challenge me on showdown

i'll smoke you

Marquis · Post Post #355 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:21 pm

i only play challenge cup on pokemon online
gg no re

orcinus_theoriginal · Post Post #356 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:23 pm

. . . . . .

BATTEL

Chevre · Post Post #357 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:26 pm

BLUE TRIBE CRITIQUE

Pros:

I like the reference to their win in the first immunity challenge. The team motto is a clever idea, and I like it! A lot of the ASCII pieces that fit are done very well, like the treasure chest, the totem pole. I like the attention to details such as a well and a treemail. The torches in particular are incredibly cute.

Cons:

If the “wordsearch” flag is wavy, then you wouldn't be able to see all the letters in word search. Should've made it just straight. Atlas Stadium is incredibly out of place, and it looks unfinished. The second team motto should've also been in a banner; it looks awkward just hanging below the first. The shelter itself is very bland and boring, and outshadowed by everything going on around it. The well...does not look like a well. The mermaid is also very strange as it is much larger than anything else going on. “Damsel” is spelled incorrectly. The envelope to the Blue Tribe below treemail is strange and out of place. If you have a bunkhouse, then what is the shelter itself for? Overall, the composition is too large to fit on one screen, which does not please me.

ORANGE TRIBE CRITIQUE

Pros:

The allusion to a sand castle is very cute. The description was nice as it explained your reasoning. Proportions and perspective, after a second glance, are lovely. There is a good grip on ASCII with this shelter.

Cons:

However, doesn't a castle seem quite ornate for a beach with few resources? You took a big risk by alluding to something from the Narnia universe, and it won't pay off because I haven't done anything with that series since I watched the first movie in theaters. The large living cloud in the northeast corner is creepy and out of place. While on a bigger screen your proportions would be correct, you also have problems with all of it fitting on one screen; in this case, because the surfers and the castle are so distant from one another, only one can be on the screen at a time, and it makes me think that the surfers are too large. The seaside village (?) looks very boring, and I don't even know what that spear-like thing is. This shelter lacks many of the details of a real Survivor camp, such as treemail and torches. “Corona” being in the sky is very strange; if it is supposed to be clouds, it doesn't look like the rest of them.

Ultimately, this is a very tough decision, as the two tribes took vastly different approaches to the building of the shelter.

However, my decision is...

Chevre · Post Post #358 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:33 pm

...in favor of the

Blue Tribe

. Ultimately, I loved all the ways it resembled a real Survivor tribe beach and shelter. Additionally, Blue's beach lends to a better sense of tribal unity, with both the tribal flag and torchwalk. Congratulations!

Orange Tribe

, you took a big risk with an unconventional approach that did not pay off, and it ended up not really blending all that well. You may retreat into your castle, as you now have

24 hours

to vote for the tribemate you want to leave Survivor: Summertime.

Marquis · Post Post #359 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:34 pm

u cant tap this

Tbh, I thoroughly enjoyed this challenge. Even seeing my own team's work destroyed early on (I didn't do it don't hate on me pls) with spasms of DEAT was pretty funny, ngl.

That being said, I'm going to throw a bitch fit on the off chance that we lose.

P-EDIT: Wow. Thanks for believing in us, Chevre <3

CuddlyCaucasian · Post Post #360 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:35 pm

The first half of this challenge felt like I was playing on XBox Live with 12-year-olds. That is never a good thing.

Lord Mhork · Post Post #361 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:37 pm

So why did you guys not break our base? I don't understand...

JDGA · Post Post #362 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:45 pm

In post 360, CuddlyCaucasian wrote:The first half of this challenge felt like I was playing on XBox Live with 12-year-olds. That is never a good thing.

Welcome to mafiascum!

animorpherv1 · Post Post #363 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:46 pm

I don't freaking understand this.

So essentially, this challenge was "create massively oversized and unfinished things?"

Lord Mhork · Post Post #364 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:53 pm

Well we made a theme though...

animorpherv1 · Post Post #365 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:54 pm

In post 364, Lord Mhork wrote:Well we made a theme though...

That wasn't a theme, it was a ripoff of like every Survivor shelter ever.

"Look, we have a mermaid that's BIGGER THAN OUR STADIUM!"

"Look, our stadium is HORRENDOUSLY OUT OF PLACE AND CONNECTED TO NOTHING!"

Lord Mhork · Post Post #366 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:55 pm

...was that not the point of the challenge? "You're on a beach. Make a survivor shelter." Did I miss something?

CuddlyCaucasian · Post Post #367 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:56 pm

In post 365, animorpherv1 wrote:
In post 364, Lord Mhork wrote:Well we made a theme though...

That wasn't a theme, it was a ripoff of like every Survivor shelter ever.

animorpherv1 · Post Post #368 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:57 pm

In post 366, Lord Mhork wrote:...was that not the point of the challenge? "You're on a beach. Make a survivor shelter." Did I miss something?

I'd advise you to look up the definition of theme.

animorpherv1 · Post Post #369 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:58 pm

In post 367, CuddlyCaucasian wrote:
In post 365, animorpherv1 wrote:
In post 364, Lord Mhork wrote:Well we made a theme though...

That wasn't a theme, it was a ripoff of like every Survivor shelter ever.

You can have a Survivor shelter without it looking like every other one in existance

Lord Mhork · Post Post #370 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:59 pm

So who you guys gonna vote off? Also did you write the note and stuff?

animorpherv1 · Post Post #371 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:00 pm

I actually have no idea what note you're talking about. Ask the others.

That said, we're voting off Mhork. It's been decided.

CuddlyCaucasian · Post Post #372 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:01 pm

In post 369, animorpherv1 wrote:
In post 367, CuddlyCaucasian wrote:
In post 365, animorpherv1 wrote:
In post 364, Lord Mhork wrote:Well we made a theme though...

That wasn't a theme, it was a ripoff of like every Survivor shelter ever.

You can have a Survivor shelter without it looking like every other one in existance

Maybe every other one in existence copied ours

Lord Mhork · Post Post #373 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:02 pm

But why? I literally carried the team this challenge :c

It was the note that said 'rawr you said that this building was for fun and you lied. Be prepared when i'm on your team.' or something like that.

animorpherv1 · Post Post #374 (ISO) » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:03 pm

I somehow doubt that.

I'm looking for one thing that is either different about your shelter that isn't absolutely horridly sized or misplaced. I've found nothing so far.